this longest day

[vurtomatic]

four seated, apart across
a confluence, a coincidence
in the hall of mirrors
reflected, our infinite
faces
four hearts, agrief
over two
who are one
four minds, lost
in this mirrored
maze of time
when does it end?
where are we
in this circular laybrinth
we built and lost,
ourselves
four, together
in this
longest day.

 

[plazma]

This is a very thought provoking work. Well written, and definately one of your better works.
-plaz out-

 

[E-girl]

four hearts, agrief
over two
who are one
this had a personal significance to me,
in my own interpretation of it.
nicely said.

 

[vurtomatic]

thank you, you two coming from you that's something