"this is how you made my heart a hunter"

[bluegirl]

"this is how you made my heart a hunter"
fingers quick with cigarette
i watch you flick ash
as your other hand
thoughtfully cups your jaw
these same fingers
that moments ago
twisted with mine
oragami silhouettes
you make me nostalgic
for two minutes ago
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um yeah .... i wrote this while listening to fallen icons by delerium, hence the title. it's about the moment after the moment when you wish you could just rewind a few seconds. ever have one of those moments???
[This message has been edited by blue kitten (edited 30 March 2001).]

 

[cherub]

makes you think a bit !
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" Stay with me just for today and let your soul come rest for a minute. "

 

[mirabii]

Great work! I feel like I know where you're coming from, although how it hit me is probably totally different from how you wrote it.. very nice indeed
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if you found out you were dreaming, would you want to wake up?
Please don't interrupt me. That last sentence took a lot of effort to think of and now I have to think of another one.