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alostlittlebird

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a block rolled slowly on the shoulders
turned the eyes to the sky
saw the sun and the light
it was bright

and the limbs shook free of the mass
gripping loose at the tree
all the bark tearing free
it was three

climbing, the light pulling in,
in, in to the source -
dying,
.....the light purifying
.........like the blast of the lightning

frightening
to the child
asleep
and a crash
it was nine

from the rain came the pain
while the coldness flowed in vain
but no use to complain
because the house is far away

the limbs pulled in,
the block shuddered - ached
for the light,
for the house,
there was a darkness growing

it was twelve
the tree evaporated
the molecules faded
into ozone

the boy dreamed of falling
down the stairs, streaked
in the shadow paint
of the night

was there comfort at the base of the stairs?
was there peace, or progression?
jealousy, and anger...
all of these

the boy floated into
the landing space
the learning place

this is the journey of child into adolescent
 
wow! this is an amazing read, incredible imagery, wonderful structure, beautiful write here. You nailed the journey we all take very well. :)
 
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