Theme

[Creative_Vibes]

There seems a to be a theme
cartels of picket fences
falling from a plane,
in my dream creating boundries for my senses
there seems to be something thats
killing my conscience
like some day i'm destined to lose the war
its smashing the walls and wearing my patience
my feet are tired and my brain is sore
there seems to be a theme
my eyes are heavy but they never lose site
like dreaming, in a dream
the confusion and cold air, holds me upright

 

[harraser]

my eyes are heavy but they never lose site
like dreaming, in a dream
the confusion and cold air, holds me upright
Impressive! I like the way you worded this poem a lot, eloquently saying how i feel a lot of the time thanks