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I can't let go of any of them
I can't be asked to do so

Don't ask Cause you don't want the answers
Don't wonder cause frankly I will tell you the truth

The One:

One may hold my heart but he never touches my body
our love to strong we just accept we are one but seperate.
He helps me understand I should keep them all.

One that can hold my warped mind at the same time
setting it free and lets me share my
thoughts without reservation,, and he needs me.

One that I giggle with over the phone at night,
I love so purely as if he was my very own.
The one I can snuggle with all night long and feel safe.

One is so reckless I can't help but want to care
though he wants me,,, i keep him at bay.

One that rules my body but not even close to my heart
I am challenged and tempted by every inch of his body
Pushing limits with him I become comfortable with me

And you:the one I play cat and mouse with
The game of who can tempt the other one first
My stubborn ways only drive you crazier.
You could have me, if you gave in,
Cause I never will.

You want me, but you wait, cause I want them all.
You won't be second best but can't help but desire to
understand the curiosity of my need to rebel against love
my determination of not letting go any of them

I can't help you understand why I feel this way
I can't even understand it myself
But I need them, all of them
maybe through them I found the perfect man
no restraints, no ties, no judgements
With each one I am free

You won't be the other man,
You can't help but falling anyway
Your lack understanding of my thoughts drives you crazy
no lies have I told you, no commitment have I asked

I need them, all of them
and
I won't give up any of them
not even for you.
 
One is the loneliest number. Your words fill my heart with pain, and as you know, pain is what drives me forward. Awesome. Very Nice
 
*faints*

Mama this is terrific..from the first word to the last.. one of the most honest pieces i've read...

...and "Don't wonder cause frankly I will tell you the truth"

that definitely made me think of your personality :)

I love you!!

Great Piece :D
 
Daym gurl! I loved this. You put this in words so well! Kinda echoes the way I feel!

You won't be second best but can't help but desire to
understand the curiosity of my need to rebel against love
my determination of not letting go any of them


I need them, all of them

and
I won't give up any of them
not even for you.

Maybe I'm warped but thats the way I think it should be! :\
 
Very awesome. Your words reek of pain and yet at the same time they dont. Love this piece.
 
This definitely is amazingly worded, i totally loved it!! The last two lines reminded me of No-face from spirited away just a little... he holds on and never lets go, a positive character i think.. contrary to popular belief..

definitely a great write, i enjoyed reading it a lot!


check your pm :D


skjalff
 
Thanks guys and gals ;) Yes,, My personality comes through and my rebelling of who and what i am always seems to come out!.

Big hugs to you all! :)
 
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