The Zone

[New]

Lightning, in a shaken can
rolling down a hill then punctured by my pencil.
Words etched into the soul backwards
and mirrored onto the canvas.
Fire flowing from the eyes
Into my hands bypassing
the keyboard, shooting
straight through the circuits, appearing
as perfection. Expressing the
fabric of reality through the
words of mortals who
have never seen love.

 

[Jabberwocky]

wow. i love your dynamic imagery. this piece is wonderfully put together. i especially like expressing the fabric of reality throuigh the words of mortals who have never seen love. great stuff.

 

[(Wordy)]

Agreed... the imagery is potent, without a doubt. I like the idea of lightning in a shaken can, and that the fire begins in the eyes. Where is the mind's eye?

 

[Ashley]

Expressing the
fabric of reality through the
words of mortals who
have never seen love.

Very nice ending. Great writing.

 

[New]

Thanks. I appreciate all the good looks.