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The Wiser.

rewiiired

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If you get what you give
and you give what you get,
what came first:
the chicken of the egg?

If everything goes in circles,
how does it start and
how do you break the cycle?

I'm burned but not broken.
I'm numb, I'm not nothing.
I don't need you to fear me.

You're blind, can't you see that?
You're overflowing, I'm imploding.
You don't need me to fear you, do you?

I don't want any of this senseless hating.
There's nothing divine in this violence.
I've had and held, bought and sold,
I've been stamped with enough
misunderstanding for several lifetimes.
But you're just not communicating.

I'm not insane, I'm
just not the same.

Maybe I deserve this
maybe vengence is the answer
maybe you deserve this
perhaps forgiveness is for the wiser.

Stamped to the wheel here
the same old rut I've known
skipping needle on a record
revolving around the nucleus
trips to the gap between this
and the beyond.

I'm not to blame.
You're not to blame.

If you get what you give
and you give what you get,
what came first:
the chicken of the egg?

If everything goes in circles,
how does it start and
how do you break the cycle?

Maybe I deserve this
maybe vengence is the answer
maybe you deserve this
perhaps forgiveness is for the wiser.

I'm not quite sane, but am I the wiser today?
 
Ok, wow! I loved this!

This bit stood out the most tho:

rewiiired said:
I'm not insane, I'm
just not the same.

We are able to identify "different", but do we understand that this means "not like me"?

Thank You rewiiired!
 
I don't know if I tell you this enough.. but your incredible. Once I read something by you that I think couldn't get any better.. you hit us with something better.

I don't know how to tell you that when I read your wrote it makes me strive to be a stronger writer.

Oh and by the way..
I'm not insane, I'm just not the same

That line was fucking incredible.

It made me feel alittle bit better about myself! *hugZ*
 
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