*~The Whisper of the Day~*

[MynameisnotDeja]

starlit night, a poets eyes
gaze into waters deep
a deep blue hue, echoes true
of secrets we wont keep

morning glow, a birds song shines
watching from her window
like a teardrops sparkle on her cheek
dewdrops shimmer, light aglow

midday sun, trying for the shade
buzzing people, buzzing bees
a light for which they all prayed
comes in whispers through the trees

evening sigh, crickets fire blue song
saw what was beyond our eyes
and the setting sun tells us the truth
of secrets songs and lies.

 

[RareForm]

exceptional!

this flowed beautifully.

 

[MynameisnotDeja]

 

[i_enjoy_ecstasy]

very nice! i really like ur writings keep up with it, i really like ur style

 

[EverythingsEventual]

This is a beautiful piece of work! I shall read more of your work in future

 

[MynameisnotDeja]

Thank you!