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The Way You Look at Me

E-girl

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They say a look can say a thousand words.
You looked at me once, long ago
In such a way
That it put me on top of the world
No one could have pulled me down that day
As was almost as if you were looking straight into my soul.
That look is why I fell in love with you.
Two years later, I had forgotten that look.
It was replaced with another look...
The kind of look you give someone when you're not really looking at them at all,
Just past them
The way you cant really look someone in the eye while you're lying to them
A look that's cold and heartless
And doesn't remember how things used to be
I miss that look.
I wonder, dont you see me as beautiful anymore?
Dont you see ME anymore?
And so last night i died my hair,
A deep red that the box claimed was "sexy and brilliant"
And i thought that would turn your head...
But all it did was turn me pink
As usual, things didn't go as i planned them
I sat on the edge of the tub and cried
I don't know if i was crying because i looked like a freak at that moment,
or because my heart-brokenness finally caught up with me
Damnit i miss you
I covered my face as i walked into the room where you were sitting
I held my breath and waited for you to laugh
And make jokes like you always do
I could feel my legs shake and the tears were still falling from my eyes
And you didn't laugh.
You took me in your arms and said "Look at me"
And i couldn't, wouldn't.
"Look at me."
And it's a moment i'll always remember:
"Look at me."
"No, i don't want you to look at my hair."
"I dont want to look at your hair, I want to look at you."
And when i looked up and let the last tear fall from my eye and i could see clear again,
All i saw was that look.
It left me breathless.
That look was all i saw
The moment before you kissed me.
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It's the little precious moments in life that need remembering.
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E-girl
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Ahhhhh.....tears in my eyes hun, really.
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I just melted it was so great.
~Jamison
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omg...
i've got tears in my eyes and i have goosebumps all over.
hun, this is probably one of my favorite works from you. i dont know if it is because of its amazing quality or because i can relate to parts of it so well.
be strong hun. the only look that REALLY matters is how you look at yourself. and i hope it is a good one because you are an amazing girl.
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::mwah::
Mella
 
I miss that look.
I wonder, dont you see me as beautiful anymore?
Dont you see ME anymore?
And so last night i died my hair,
A deep red that the box claimed was "sexy and brilliant"
And i thought that would turn your head...
But all it did was turn me pink
As usual, things didn't go as i planned them
I sat on the edge of the tub and cried
I don't know if i was crying because i looked like a freak at that moment,
or because my heart-brokenness finally caught up with me
Damnit i miss you
you my dear, are brilliant
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I love it! Thank you for stirring my emotions....in a good way!
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That was a wonderful construction of words and so wonderful. It's odd how you feel like you know a person when you never even met them. you see. That's what I used to do. My love from long long ago when I just wanted him to notice me. I would dye my hair all weird exotic colors. HIs comments would mostly be mean ones about my hair, but I did get his attention.
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...
 
You never fail to make me feel, just when things start to look hopeless. Thanks for instilling faith in me-once again.
J.
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Dusk is just an illussion, because the sun is either simply above the horizon or below it. And that means day and night are linked in a way that few things are; there cannot be one without the other, yet they cannot exist at the same time.
(How would it feel to be always together, yet forever apart....)
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