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apollo

apollo

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what i want the most
is what i'm furthest from having
and what makes it worse
is that i'll always be so close...
through thick glass i watch you play
alone i long for your company, minute by minute, day by day
you know i'm here but our eyes don't meet
feeling inadequate, i watch the many you greet
shackled by my doubts
i stand where i am
my life frozen in awe of your talents
yours propelled so fast i feel hopelessly lost
i don't want to hold you back
i just want to hold on
so please, look through the glass
despite the pain, these feelings will not pass...
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wisest is he who knows that he does not know...
 
...sad, sad,
lament.
But... just a little sweet, all at the same time.
*hug*
 
Sending heaps of love, and huge hugs.
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The only thing I'm good at is being bad.
 
Superb. I felt like I was reading my own work, meaning you put it into words that said exactly what I feel.
"what i want the most
is what i'm furthest from having
and what makes it worse
is that i'll always be so close..."
this is an example of a true feeling translated perfectly into words, something very rare.
Great job, parts of your style relate to mine, so it just made me see everything you said.
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"On your planet, 1+1=2; On our planet, 1+1=1." - Ceiba
 
thanks guys... the situation which saw me writing that just got worse, so there's more to come...
plaz knows where i'm coming from... drop us a line dude ;\
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wisest is he who knows that he does not know...
 
dont give up hunni. that is what i will say. hold onto the feelings you have. i know what its like to want to be with some one and care for them so much. but all you can do is watch over them and admire from afar. be there angel and look after them. the love you have will one day come to you in return.
*huggles and kisses* 4 u hunni.
(ring me if you wana chat okay?u have my number)
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*queensmack*
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has anyone seen my mind? its around here some where. if so please send it back!
 
quote: 'what i want the most
is what im furthest from having
and what makes it worse
is that i'll always be so close...'
that poem hunni is that well written... *wipes a tear from her eye* i share the feelings with you totally.
keep smiling for me.
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has anyone seen my mind? its around here some where. if so please send it back!
 
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