The things that don't exist

[FoxyKel]

It's the things that don't exist
that really haunt my dreams
I imagine that they're perfect
but they're never as it seems

Then from the corner of my mind
comes the scream of the voices
Holding up the warrant of death
To sentence me for my choices

It's the things that don't exist
that really haunt my dreams
I imagine that they're perfect
but they're never as it seems

I wonder how I sleep at night
While the voices scream and moan
How can I be so stupid
To presume that I'm alone

 

[mr_fluffy]

Then from the corner of my mind
comes the scream of the voices
Holding up the warrant of death
To sentence me for my choices

too often we are our own worst critics. victim, accused, judge, jury and executioner, all in one.

 

[plazma]

Hot damn!

Very goddamned nice work.

It's the things that don't exist
that really haunt my dreams

Love that.

-plaz out-

 

[cherub]

lovely work,

like the thought mind process that could take you anywhere.

 

[Splatt]

Wow, I know peoples words are personal, and it is in-sight to their current state or emotion, but I can really relate to this!

*bump*

 

[Chaotic Action Man]

hmmm i somehow missed this the first time around. good poem.

 

[rewiiired]

I missed this as well. I can most certainly relate. Very good work.

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

....haven't seen you around in a long long while....
nice to have you back,
and with excellent work!

 

[antinazi77]

it is realy good and makes me wonder if it was the lyrics that made people embrace enter the sandman. I always figured people were to stupid to get it, and it was just the whole climactic boom thing.......ya never know

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Another good bump! Great stuff FoxyKel, the last line is completely unexpected - made me re-read your poem and see it in a different light!

 

[FoxyKel]

Originally posted by iLoveYouWithaKnife
....haven't seen you around in a long long while....
nice to have you back,
and with excellent work!

I haven't written in a long long while, this is an old piece that splatt bumped... I've been having writers block, I can't put my current feelings into words, so I've not been posting.

Seeing splatt bump this, and you guys respond all over again, has made me want to share with you again. Hopefully I will be posting soon

Kel

 

[smileyfish]

*huge hugs*

Kel, I've just overcome 3 years of writers - lets hope it's contagious! Nice work too - easy to relate. Hope to read more from you soon beautiful girl.

Smiley

 

[neverwas]

It's the things that don't exist
that really haunt my dreams
I imagine that they're perfect
but they're never as it seems

nice choice of words

 

[antinazi77]

It’s not what we don't know that hurts, it's what we know ain't so - will Rogers

 

[Urbanhog]

wow..... good poem... thanks splatt for bumping this.

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

I think a whole bunch of us has had writers block.
It's good to see you around in this forum though.

I find it weird now, in here sometimes.....

You'll see the same post on the first page for days......
And then the next day......
There is all new post, by all new users, most of which you've never seen.
It's nice to recognize.

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

... and be recognized.

 

[FoxyKel]

It was lovely to be recognised, you made my day. Thanks