The separation of the two

harraser

harraser

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A first impression
Taken through spiteful eyes.
The conflict begins
And a broken middle
Is all that is sure
For two halves of a whole
That see each other for the first time.

Cavitys form,
The sounds of rending flesh
From the relentless pull
Of oppoiste equals
And the pointless fight for individuality
By a siamese couple
Who've never truly tried to work together.

So breath-takingly beautiful,
They dance in their fight,
Even more stunning
For the blood stains
Starting to form between them,
Showing that soon the beauty
Will be forever lost.

Finally they separate
With a cry of freedom
And a wail of loss
The pair become individuals
And for a split second realise
They were one all along
And that now it is all too late.
 
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All that shimmers in this world is sure to fade away again...
Hey Ant... these things happen even to the best of us. Give yourself time, and then become yourself and become an individual. Don't be afraid.... sometimes independance is the most awakening of experiences. Enjoy the freedom while you have it.
And above all else: SMILE! :D
Misty
 
well painted, the feelings are conveyed so well in this along with great imagery. Why is it that we often write our best when we're hurting the most?
 
So breath-takingly beautiful,
They dance in their fight,
Even more stunning
For the blood stains
Starting to form between them,
Showing that soon the beauty
Will be forever lost.
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holy good lord!!! This gave me chills ant...chills that you can see...ya know those little bumps that pop up on your skin ;) ??
you truly amaze me with what you constantly have to say, and all that you bring to this forum =)
 
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The pair become individuals
And for a split second realise
They were one all along
And that now it is all too late.
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Booooootiful... you never cease to amaze me. :)
*joins the long list of harrasser fans*
And on another note - Welcome to Bluelight ella. Good to see you posting. :)
 
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oh my fucking goodness!!!! this is my favorite thing i've ever seen you write! maybe it's my melancholy mood, but this piece brought tears to my eyes...this phrase hurt the most....
Finally they separate
With a cry of freedom
And a wail of loss
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ouch! thank you for this...if my printer worked i would print this one out...
 
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Ant I can't wait to meet you in person, so I can smack you in the back of the head for saying that you don't think much of your poetry.
I'm pleasantly astounded by the imagery that this brings up, its so intricate and delicate.
Please do more work like this, and post it, because this one has been a sheer pleasure to read.
-plaz out-
 
Originally posted by harraser:
AFinally they separate
With a cry of freedom
And a wail of loss
The pair become individuals
And for a split second realise
They were one all along
And that now it is all too late.
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And the worst part: you can't put it back togther. Trying to do that only makes it worse.
I'm finding out yet again.
[ 03 September 2002: Message edited by: GentlemanLoser ]
 
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Originally posted by harraser:
So breath-takingly beautiful,
They dance in their fight,
Even more stunning
For the blood stains
Starting to form between them,
Showing that soon the beauty
Will be forever lost.
Finally they separate
With a cry of freedom
And a wail of loss
The pair become individuals
And for a split second realise
They were one all along
And that now it is all too late.
Click to expand...
*cries*.. that wsa really beautiful
 
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