The person I loved......

[TrAnCe&aCiD]

You where the greatest person for me,
I saw us together for as far as I could see
You where my whole life,
One day I wanted you to be my wife,
You broke my heart,
It hurt alot,
I never have had a single thought,
But suicide is on my mind alot.
Life seems to be so un-fair,
I could die and no one would care.
But I know suicide is a sin,
So I say Amen.
I love God so much,
I know im out to lunch.
I want our friendship to mend,
And I will forever be forever your friend.

Im sorry

 

[shal]

Hi Trance!

*Hugs* - I know how much it hurts to loose the one you loved. Your not alone, even though I'm sure it feels like your isolated and alone with the feeling of overwhelming hopelessness, lost between a painted sky.

They say time heals hurt. I wish my time would hurry up and come. Though it does get easier as you move forward. Don't allow yourself to drown in your own misery, as hard as it may seem.

We are both rowing the same boat, both lost in the same sea.

Stay strong my friend.

Your writing reflected your feelings perfectly.

Shal.

 

[neverwas]

*hugs*

my mind keeps on coming back to these few lines...

Life seems to be so un-fair,
I could die and no one would care.

i had already been crying before reading this peice and the emotions u have shown through this made me cry again...not for what i was crying for before...but for the relating so easily to ur emotions through this.

i sit here sometimes and wonder if i am truely over my last relationship...it was only 8-9mths but we had such a good partnership we were so entwined, seen our future together, started planning for the future that when it ended it cut like a knife, and it was deep.

they also say it takes twice as long as u were with the person to truely get over tehm...well i hate that theory. u can nevr truely be over someone u have fallen hard for. little things remind you of them. certain smells, touches and sights will always being back memories. be it unwanted or wanted...but it up to you to gain a handle on them. in time the wounds will heal but there is no time set for that.

i really liked this peice and it was very well written and ur emotions were so easily identified through ur choice of words.if u need to talk pm me.

well done

kel