the passion, the love

[the other side]

i dont want to let myself be vulnerable to you
but i want you to dominate me
i want to keep my pride
but lose my vanity
i want you to fuck me
with as much passion as you can give
i dont want it to just be physical
i want to touch
soul to soul
not just skin to skin
i dont want you to use me
or make me just another girl
i want you to focus
on me
penetrate
close your eyes
and then see me
and only me
i want the romance
the candles
and the roses
and the passion
the love
deep
dark
mysterious
if even for just a night
then lets do it right
with elegance
and grace
total feelings and emotions
i want you to feel it throughtout your body
in your fingers and in your toes
the passion that surrounds
and the devotion
and if i die
i want you to revenge my death.
remember the crow.
11-5-01

 

[**Deja_Claire_Voyant**]

Hey! As the first to read and respond, I'd just like to give ya a big THUMBS UP!
Rock on, I liked it. It made me sweat. I think I gotta go be with my fiance now, hehe!

*Andi*

 

[fairyprincess]

great poem, reflects exactly what i am feeling. ::thumbs up::

 

[5FACES]

mmmmmm, so passionate!
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before love there are
memories of innonence.
after there are none...