The Nightwaters.

[Spore]

Wade through the SubconsciouseLake
and into the inky blackness slip
and if you wish to be submerged
Then in the Nightwaters dip
Dive beneath the surface
and let yourself forget
Let yourself surrender
Into heaven slip
Heaven is much closer
Much closer than you think
It is there in the Nightwaters
where beneath the surface may you sink
So in this brief while, while we are still alive
Gather your courage and into the icey blacknes
dive
It is in the syrup of life we swim
and in the subconsciouse we thrive
A mythical night is dawning
Swim in the dark while you are alive.

 

[plazma]

*dives*
This was really thought provoking. I agree, we do need to take the dive just to try and understand who we are.
Great work.
-plaz out-

 

[rm-rf]

wow this was a really good work. I really like the specific ways u described your concept. I could think of many amazing (<that word is used way too much inthis forum) visualizations to accompany this writing. I highly enjoyed reading it several times.

 

[Spore]

Thanks,
Spore has been wondering for awhile if Mr. THE WOOD and I have a similar world-view.
I've been meaning to post a motherload of old poems + metaphysical lymrics of mine in this forum once I gather the cyber-courage to lyrically pounce.

 

[rm-rf]

considering your name is "Spore" and its obvious mycological reference, Im quite sure that we do!

 

[rm-rf]

*BuMp*