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the night i found out about you...and a drunken observation...

yoUr bLiSS

yoUr bLiSS

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when i first met you
i hated you
i hated the thought of you
i hated the idea of you
"the new girlfried"
you stole my title
here i had been waiting
patiently
quietly
just a friend
until she left
so i could step up
make my move
finally take him
as mine
i remember that night well
last february
you were not there
you were sick
with strep throat
he told me about you
my smile froze
yet stayed intact
only my eyes changed
thank god the lights were dim
i never faltered
not for a moment
ironically
it was then
that some drunk guy
clumsily approached us
camera in hand
blubbering about
how he had been observing us
and what a perfect couple we made
how truly in love we seemed
he wanted to capture us on film
our eyes
our hair
almost like brother and sister
he said
he was so loud
and so passionate
he even brought strangers in
"don't they make a beautiful couple?"
and everyone agreed
he zoomed in on our lips
yours perfect
mine a bit too thin
and proudly showed us
that we have the same smile
we didn't have the heart
to tell him otherwise
so instead we smiled
and let him click away
and blabber
for awhile
when he finally left
we had a good laugh
he hugged me close
leaned down
kissed me on the forehead
(he always does that)
shook his head and said
how he couldn't wait to tell you about this
you would get
"such a kick out of it"
i told him i was happy for him
and i couldn't wait to meet you
and then i turned around
with glistening eyes
crumpled up the napkin
with the drunk guys e-mail
and threw it in the trash
i did not want to see those pictures
i did not want to see him
i did not want to see you
i turned the corner
and ran to the dance floor
to forget for awhile
i would love to have those pictures now
 
i like this... loving the friend who is so perfect for you, and he's got a girlfriend, i know how it is
*DAW
 
thanks guys...
part 2
when i finally met you
in that little alcove
near the bathrooms
you caught me off guard
instantly
i cranked my smile up a few notches
and turned on the plastic charm
lavishing you in praise
and overzealous small talk
"i've heard sooo much about you!"
"i hope you are feeling better!"
you were nothing like i had imagined
short
simple
sweet
you looked
ludicrous
awkward
just plain wrong
standing besides him
where was the drunk guy now?
to take pictures of this
perfect couple
perfectly ridiculous
that is
i hated you even more now
i hated you for being nice to me
i hated you for being genuine
i hated you for being you
for 2 weeks
i somehow managed
to avoid you two
dodging behind pillars
averting gazes
feigning sudden interest
in the most uninteresting of things
merely because you were near
and i wanted to seem busy
and then once again
you caught me off guard
slightly intoxicated
fresh drink in hand
on a weeknight
at that rather large event
that he opened for
i remember i was the only one
dancing for the first half hour
"do you remember me?"
you said
all wide-eyed and hopeful
this tiny girl
with a smile bigger then you are tall
(which isn't much)
"yes" i replied
"what was your name again?"
as if your name hadn't burned
a searing hole into my memory
the moment it came off of his lips
"i saw you dancing earlier by yourself
that's so cool!"
and then you bounced off back to him.
i found my friends
and made fun of your tube top
all night
i told them all how "cheesy" you were
it's amazing
how immature and petty
jealousy can make one
i left that night hating you even more
because i could feel myself starting
to like you
 
I was in love with a girl for a long time and when I finally met her boyfreind I just wanted to tear his throat out coz he was such a nice guy.....I dont know if theyre still going out or not but I still love her and Im afraid to ask if theyre still together cause if I found out they werent it'd kill me that she hadnt told me (she knows without a doubt how I feel). be strong darls and just make freinds with her,you may not have got the guy but you might as well make a new freind,a consalation prize is better than nothing at all even if you dont get the jackpot.
 
This is very descriptive and I have felt the same way before, which just makes this all that much more appealing to me :)
 
*sigh*
Very nice... There was a time where I saw myself falling into a similar situation... Thankfully the jealous was controlled before it bred anger...
 
wow...all the replies! thanks guys! i really want to continue on with this because the story takes on a whole new twist...
 
well put up more then....
whats taking so long? Im waiting.........
come on I really want to read more :)
 
you should have seen me
when he told me the news
that familiar naive feeling
of hope and anticipation
welled up inside again
you broke up
but remain the "best" of friends
i danced on clouds that night
skipping
spinning
dizzy with bliss
though i was slightly suprised
to see you by his side the following week
and the following
and the following
you started to irritate me
i really hated you know
why were you there???
we had many bathroom run-ins
my plastic charm
in full effect
you started talking to me
just the "best" of friends
i noticed you used the same phrase
in the same sing-song tone
and then one day
it happened
at the forest party
how can you not bond
coming off your roll
one too many
early morning beers
bare-assed
behind a tree
laughing hysterically
because you lost the toilet paper
my eyes were forced open
twice
that weekend
once to his true self
highly disappointing
i must add
(though i still had yet to see it all)
and then to your true self
maybe i hated you
because you were so much like me
finally
i found someone as
goofy
unafraid
and passionate
as myself
whether it's bustin
a tap dance front and center with me
or impersonating the cadbury easter bunny
to all who would listen
nothing was too crazy for you
if only he knew the power
of this explosive combination
and what adventures
and mishaps would soon follow
i had found my partner in crime
[ 28 December 2001: Message edited by: yoUr bLiSS ]
 
WOW!!! not at all what I expected to hear but definitely a happy ending,the story definitely does take a twist eh....I loved it darls.nice work :)
[ 29 December 2001: Message edited by: harraser ]
 
thanks guys for listening to my saga...there's still more...a lot more actually but i'll continue it another day.... :)
 
awww come on put it up noyyywwwwww (whieny little kid voice :) )...ok Im tired and spaced I can be silly if I want :P but you really should,I like all these continuing stories that have been going up lately,keeps me coming back for more :)
 
buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuump
I really really liked this little saga(does it show from the multitude of replies I gave?lol) :)
 
oh...harraser you rock! thanks for bumping this. it made me so happy to read this again. :) strange because the last time i saw this crazy girl i admitted that i made fun of her and called her "cheesy" at first becaues i had a crush on her boyfriend...we laughed hysterically...
 
how i ever missed this the first three times, i have NO idea, but i f*cking love you, girlie!!!
*fully inspired*
 
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