the night i found out about you...and a drunken observation...

[Ms PeachyBreeks]

This is absolutely amazing... the first parts brought tears to my eyes because I've been there myself, including the photograph piece, though in a different way.
The end is an unexpected twist and I can't wait to read more if it's on the way.
Fantastic.

 

[funki]

This captured me for a good 5 minutes
its fantastic
-funki-

 

[yoUr bLiSS]

i don't care much for him anymore
at least not in that way
i used to always run up
wrap myself around him
and stay as long as possible
i now run up
and ask if you are here
where you are
how you are doing
i think it irritates him a bit
his "favorite" girl
no longer drools and fusses
about in his presence
no longer feeds his greedy little ego
and you
you are 10,000 times the person
he could ever dream to be
i know it
he knows it
i even think you know it
though you pretend to be happy
going along with this
ridiculous "agreement"
you two have
yet somewhere deep down inside
that arrogant selfish ego
he does truly care for you
i remember the night i saw this
he was leaning against the wall
near the girl's bathroom
his head in his hands
i did not even see him
till he frantically grabbed me
he asked me to check on you
you were sick
"please make sure she's ok"
"tell her i'm right here"
i went in to check on you
and when i came out
the look in his eyes broke my heart
he was so anxious
so worried
so in love with you
i tried to settle his fears
he wanted me to stay with you
he trusted me
"please" he pleaded
"please take care of her for me"
"ok" i said
feeling my heart break into more pieces
that was over a year ago
you two still have your "agreement"
and you still drive him around
27 years old and no car
in retrospect
i am happy
that you got the boy
i could easily see myself
caught up in him
had i been given the opportunity
yet as an observer
instead of a participant
i see what you don't see
everything about you
outshines
everything about him
you glow
you mesmerize
your energy
radiates
and
dominates
as for him
not much substance
not much spirit
he simply looks good
behind the decks

 

[LayLikeBroccoli]

i really enjoyed reading this.

 

[harraser]

I

you Bliss
youve put a smile on my face on a shit of a morning, when I didnt think anyone could. thanks *hugs* love ant :D

 

[Furnace]

this rules.