the most beautiful pain...

[~* s p r o u t *~]

inspired by a "social" thread...
a crush.
such a tasty treat...
free spirited is the crush
on that special him...
ahhh...
to swallow the fluttering butterflies...
turning the colour of rose
you believe he sees and hears
your tender heart pounding...
mmmm...
to be able to dream
be it day or night...
these are the hopes woven
the tapistry of fantasies...
fantasy it shall remain
retaining that sweetness and innocence...
one perfect treat after another...
until that certain rush
painful yet exquisite...
it crashes down on you
with all its heaviness and might...
that unbearable lightness of being
replaced by feelings of despair...
harder you try
as try as you will
to tear yourself free
from the stronghold of its grab...
fight it as you will...
knowing all the while
it holds your last breath...
in semi-consciousness...
looking back you realize
this was no ordinary crush...
by god, this was love...
the exquisite pain you carry
for an eternity...
for that he
whom you let get away...
one love...

 

[applesbliss]

good god damn!, that was beautiful....and painLESS to read.

applesbliss
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PLUR in moderation

 

[koz143]

one luv

 

[~* s p r o u t *~]

awww... thanks guys *blush*... this is my very first words post, too

ok, i'm all giddy now

one love.

 

[bc]

heh. rawk.

i know this feeling. so so do.
bc

 

[ice-9]

one love.
bump.

 

[Dagny]

WOW!!!!!!!!!
Holy shit Sproutles!!! That was beautiful!! Please post more in 'words'.

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It doesn't matter where you've been, as long as it was deep.

 

[RitalinGurrl]

ohhhh

nice.

 

[~* s p r o u t *~]

oh wowzers... thx fer the bumpy ice... awies... *blush*... i remember writing this after reading someone's distraught post in social... sumthing about a crush... and broken heart...
it's nice to have loved...

i love my bluelight friends...
sprout *heart* bluelight
[This message has been edited by ~* s p r o u t *~ (edited 07 June 2001).]

 

[bTs]

well done, make sure you get back in here and write some more, kay?
//bTs

 

[XshtoopsX]

Your poem is very beautiful Sprouts!!! I think many know the very feeling you are portraying, yet have never seen it brought together so beautifully into words as you have done.
Its amazing how we all inspire each other within these posts. You're words were inspired by another's post, and is now inspiring many others who read it.

 

[LilkelPixy]

**tear** it's so hard to get over that one love....
please keep writing, babes
~Pixy

 

[E-girl]

*sigh*
beautiful.
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*Banging Your Head Against a Wall uses 150 Calories an Hour*
Two guys walk into a bar. You'd think one of them would have seen it.
--Daniel Lybra

 

[split_oak]

nice!
bump

 

[PixieGirl]

WOW! Sprout! I never knew that you could write like that. This was so beautiful.