the MISSION.... punctuation, spelling and formatting issues!!!

[spgeddi]

I’m ditchin’ this mission, switchin’ positions,
Granting myself permission to chase my ambitions.
Break from traditions,
Turnin’ my ass around- improvin’ my conditions.
Its official,
Real,
Put myself to the test… Batfink’s wings of steel
Couldn’t protect me,
Couldn’t deflect the,
Question marks that circle over my head - to torment me.
Reinvented, rejuvenated,
A new growth cycle’s, instigated
By heavy pruning
No distractions permitted, the new me is mushrooming
And blooming,
Booming,
Pounding out a rhyme boasting how all the celebrity chicks are hot to do me,
And who blew me,
Some people boo me,
Most nod and smile
My patterns are tight and linger a little while
Then fool me.
And its cool the
Way we do the do an’ the way we bada-ba-doobee!
Now I'll shut the fuck up and roll another scoobie.

 

[New]

Pressure gets to me as well. Sometimes the best thing to do is chillax and accept things as they are now before we move forward.:D

 

[spgeddi]

hey g'day New.
reading that back i've decided all was going well with the piece till it went to shit about the 17th line! One of those writers block moments when you think, fuck where now? so i the went brag rap...how lame!
anyway it was mostly about saying, hi i'm popping by occassionally... maybe i better post something that hints at a new me.

 

[New]

If you so desire, I would love to read it. Welcome.:D