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The Mermaid

mariacallas

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tropical sauna
As the delicate mermaid
struggles to walk
one right foot forward
after her left one falls back
Her sereneness betrays her torment
silently struggling to find her rhythm
For every accomplished step
Each one so scathingly sharp
she finds herself tearing
Oh such agonizing painful throbs
Like sharp knives piercing her heart
Stabbing right through her soul
For every little step.
And in such a painful wake
she doesnt even look back
To see ...
That dark red roses
Have bloomed along her path.


...i did this in ten minutes...it can have many meanings to many different people.....i hope its not too vague ..i like the way it turned out, and i know what it means specifcally to me :)
 
I agree, so beautiful... I can see a few different meanings, great work... post more!
 
I like it. It builds up painful and difficult leading to the last couple of lines that make it beautiful and worthwhile. Good work...:)
 
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