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the grassman

Dtergent

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-the grassman.-
he counted reeds.
thats what he did.
the crazy grassman was always just there
sticking out like a sore, neon thumb
among the neat, clean businessmen
in their shiny cars
the only homeless dude to ever grace
our upper class suburban subdivion.
in his tattered
rags,
he walked up and down the streets,
counting long, wet reeds in his hands
(i tried to do it once
but i got cut)
with such speed,
that you knew he was used to it,
that you knew
it was all he ever did.
he looked like jimi hendrix,
except for his hair-
which, because it was never washed,
became one solid matted dreadlock-
and his nose,
which was huge, maybe he was born with it, maybe it was a tumor,
which made mothers tell their kids
"behave, or i'll give you to the big nosed monster"
some say his name was esteban,
and that he used to be rich,
but he squandered his fortune.
and now he counts reeds because he was still used to counting his money.
some say he was a gardener
who murdered the family he worked for.
some say he was abused as a child
and was chained to a tree
beside the creek,
among the reeds.
but everyone said he was crazy.
the crazy grassman, the crazy grassman.
one day, i was on my way to
the video repair shop
to get my vcr.
when i saw the crazy
crazy
crazy grassman
stuffing a pothole with reeds and soil.
i used to be afraid to talk to him
(just like everyone was)
but at that moment,
he was a good man, fixing our roads,
not a murderer
(nor did he have pruning scissors or gardening tools at hand)
so i asked him what he was doing.
he looked at me and smiled.
a smile which told me he was glad someone noticed him
and cared to say a word to him.
"i'm taking the holes out", he said, with a cloud of horrible breath floating my way.
taking the holes out of the people's way, the people who called him crazy and stared at his nose.
the reeds were all he had,
and he was stuffing them to smoothen a road
for which he didn't even have a car to drive over.
"i don't got money.", he said sadly but smiling.
"and i don't even got a house. but what makes my life okay is the smile on other people's faces, because it gives me good dreams, and it tells me that it is enough to be happy."
just then a silver bmw went by slowly, with the man inside smiling at the grassman, giving him a little salute for killing the pothole.
and i looked at the grassman
and heard his voice in my head
and i knew he wasn't crazy
he wasn't crazy at all.
[This message has been edited by Dtergent (edited 11 May 2000).]
 
ahhhh...
that was so beatiful...
it made my day better reading that story/poem...
i guess you have to take a closer look sometimes, give a smile, lend a hand, give what you have, love one another, and be kind to all...
.....much love....peace
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Together we dance; wild , naked and free...yield this wild love.
 
D,
I really like this. It almost made me cry, but then I'm emotional by nature.
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Beautiful work.
Caress
 
Wow. I'm breathless. No shit, that really was a beautiful piece of writing. I love your style D. I've read some of your other stuff, and you have a gift with words.
I'd be really like it if you could check out some of my stuff and lemme know what you think. Be brutal.
Theres some old stuff floating around in words......but I'd love you to read 'Winter Love', 'Acidic Misery' and/or 'Supremisism. Search then as subjects.
Only if you want to....no pressure. I just repect your opinion as a writer. You can e-mail me with your thoughts.
Ashke has already checked em' out, but I'd really like to share them with you.
[email protected]
Keep up the writing
Angel
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thanks a lot. that meant a lot to me.
the best advice any writer can give another is, love your senses.
see everything, smell everything, hear everything, taste everything, and touch everything.
the feelings and emotions will flow so hard from there.
mad luv
D
 
That is something we all need to hear about sometimes. One to make us look at our selves and see sometimes the petty stuff does not count. It is really being happy and offering happiness to others. Everyday we have a chance to change people lives just alittle with statement, a hug or gesture of some sort. The gift is really to ourselves as much as it is to others.
 
That is one of the most beautiful things I've ever read.
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I'm amazed,,,this is my first look into this forum and it is a wonderful change from all the "Is plugging good?" posts
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Seriously this story has changed the way i percieve things, i almost cried
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