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The EscapE-- First poem submitted--- If its not about drugs than whats it about?

Squeaks

Squeaks

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Oh Caress you have inspired me! Although I am not as good as you Please tell me(and everyone what you think)Keep on posting girl you are a natural!
My EscapE
I run to you
I have fun with you
I use you as my way out
In a life filled with ups and downs you help me chose the ups
I am free with you
I am stable with you
You are my source of EscapE
I start abusing you
I get sick from you
I hurt from you
But still I go back to you
You help me EscapE
When I am away from you I feel imcomplete
I shut down
So I run to you
You are my source of EscapE
Please send me some feedback cuz its the first poem I have ever really wrote.
I just wanted to point out that this poem is not about Drugs in any way so try to think about what I am talking about I bet no one can guess what it really is about!!
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So how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Roll Tootsie Pop?..... The world may never know!
 
Squeaks,
I really like it!! It's not about drugs - it's a person isn't it??? You CAN become addicted to people. I'm proud of the time and talent you put into this. Thank you for sharing with us.
Your Sis,
Caress
 
Nope not about people but you are on the right track Strike 1
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So how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Roll Tootsie Pop?..... The world may never know!
 
Nope not about TV either Strike 2
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So how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Roll Tootsie Pop?..... The world may never know!
 
It's either your computer or flatulence... farting is often my escape and I love it but I do get sick from it
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With a small change in spacing,
Being One = Being On E
 
I liked it . . . .
is it about a love in your life, maybe a first love, dont know just guessing. .
keep up the good words
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the music is my guide. . .the night is my life. . .
i am me. . .
luv and hugz
 
I am taking a guess here but could it be GOD. I dont know if u are a spiritual person or not but that is how I would take it....
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If Everyone Rolled There Would Be world Peace..
 
TrwelyTrubble very good guess but.... Strike Three Your out Okay in my ballpark its four stikes and your out. This is going to be a hard one cause knowone really knows how I am. I am sure some can get an idea from what its from if they can remember what i always talk about in my emails and posts.... Hint....Hint...Hint!
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So how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Roll Tootsie Pop?..... The world may never know!
 
k since this was getting down to the bottom I figure I will let the cat out of the bag and tell you guys what I was talking about....... My EscapE is work!! I love being at work even when the job gets me stressed out at times I still miss it when I have off pretty wierd huh!
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So how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Tootsie Roll Tootsie Pop?..... The world may never know!
 
Squeaks,
I would have never guessed. I wish I enjoyed my job as much as you do. The only job I enjoy and escape to is being a mom. Hey - ya know what - now I get it!!! Talk to you soon. Email me baby bro.
Caress
 
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