The Endless dream of love

[The Endless]

Laying in the dark,
a vision came to me.
Of an Angel and a rose
and the stars and the sea.
She filled me with her love,
as we walked hand in hand.
Her beauty has no equal,
not in the heavens nor the land.
As we layed through the night,
in each others arms,
She whispered in my ear,
Her voice, how it calms.
As she whispered those three words,
a tear hit the ground.
The gods cried with joy
and flowers bloomed all around.
I gazed into her eyes
and all I could see,
was a love that will last,
for all eternity.
Ok, so I'm not much of a poet, but the feeling behind the words is the important thing.

[This message has been edited by The Endless (edited 14 May 2000).]
[This message has been edited by The Endless (edited 14 May 2000).]

 

[cherub]

that was awesome, i am in kinda like wow stay,, it really touched me i love to read poetry even if you say your not one but this was pretty well very moving you did great

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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~

 

[CyaLuvyaBye]

to me poetry is about feeling wat the author wrote
i felt your words
love ur colors and the pic too
however did u do that????
love and plur
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me