The Clinic

[vodkabuddha]

Off into the clinic today,
filed down and filed away.
But the time will be gone,
And the echoes of your footsteps will run you down.
The floor scratches of your youngest son,
cuffed and stuffed and bound.
A cut on the head, a lack of songs to sing,
and if I die, the pain is your’s,
I haven’t lost a thing.

 

[vodkabuddha]

i worked on this one for a long ass time...thoughts?

 

[Spider Rob]

its about an abortion?

 

[vodkabuddha]

no it's about people who send other people away

retirement homes, asylums, camps, stuff like that

 

[RareForm]

And the echoes of your footsteps will run you down.

this line really was evident of that. i really liked this.

 

[cherub]

GOOD JOB! Seems like alot of heart put into this,,
I like it!

 

[pennywise]

its funny, when i heard clinic i thought methadone clinic. other people thought abortion clinic, and you thought retirement homes.

 

[vodkabuddha]

oh thanks guys.