That place.

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

I'm at that place again,
Floating, feelings encompassing,
Taking in, all of it, everything,
Sinking weightless forever,
The walls seem ethereal,
I see everything, all of it,
None of it, even matters anymore,
Silent thoughts overflowing,
Spilling over dream walls,
Of that place I'm in,
Floating, feelings encompassing...

 

[Butterfly_096]

I think I might be in that place too. Very nice writting.

 

[mariacallas]

peaking dreaming orgasmic feeling hmmmmmmmm?

 

[cherub]

reminds me of the past. awesome words that make the picture come clear.

 

[RareForm]

^i agree, i really liked this one..

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Sinking weightless forever

My place makes me feel the same. Nice

 

[E-girl]

in the words of marsha brady... "dreamy" !

 

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

Thanks everybody, glad you all liked it.

Here's another, same style.
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I'm at that place again,
It's dark, and cold, and threatening,
Rushing in, through everything,
The pain, boiling up forever,
The walls are closing in,
I can't see anything, not a thing,
None of it, even matters anymore,
Tortured thoughts overpower it,
Spilling over all the walls,
Of that place I'm in,
Floating, feelings torturing...

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

^Wow.
=Slithers all over the page=

This is wonderful. :D
Makes me feel so alive.

 

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

Bump.


Good lord, someone just slithered all over the page.
I must be better than I think.

 

[-=ReD-hAzE=-]

Bumpage.