(Wordy) Moderator: BAD Staff member Joined Oct 23, 2005 Messages 1,544 Location VIC, AU Dec 5, 2007 #1 I've removed this poem for copyright reasons, pending a submission to an e-zine. Last edited: Jan 30, 2008
New Bluelight Crew Joined Mar 11, 2005 Messages 17,972 Location New Jersey Dec 6, 2007 #2 Sounds like my life. You've captured a shared moment. That's awesome.:D
Raz Bluelighter Joined Aug 11, 2002 Messages 7,329 Location In an igloo made of asbestos and chicken-wire. Dec 16, 2007 #3 I like the way it's stuttered....makes it seem more nervous/jangled?