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burn2shine

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Dead again

yesterday, you had so much shit to say
premonitions, by the way
which leads us to
today, the day of my death
so many things I've wanted to get off my chest
before I knew it flash back to my very first breath
So vivid that my very last seems like the past
and I see all the forked paths in life that I went down too fast
What I should have done, why should I even ask?
it's history, but what's ahead of me is mystery
and I can't help but let it get to me
Will I see clouds, nothing, or burn for eternity
Or will I see the greek gods about whom I've learned so urgently
But right now is right now, and I never really apreciated that fact
Always living in regret wishing I could turn time back
and unfork my path and live life on the straight and narrow
Turn defiantly like a bird that would face a scarecrow
But what happened today and always was just fate
and I realized this a bit to late
But it's not really important now anyways
aint it strange how things as plain as day could change so quickly
but that ain't to say I don't wish that I'd have done shit differently
slowed down in appreciation of the moment like I did when I was a kid
Gone out and experienced something new, all those things I never did
But regret's never done me any good in the past
So there's no need to go down that path
I just need to step toward the light without looking back
with an open mind for what the future holds
after all enlightenment was always my goal
Finaly a definate answer
a new frontier, another chapter
a new life full of the change I've been after
I've read the books, I've read the scripts
afterall death is just one last trip
I've tripped before but not like this
born again but lifeless, too late to change what life is
If I could I would change a lot about how I act
And then i heard "CLEAR" and they brought me back.
 
holyyyyyyyy shit,
i got the chills.

thats really my judge of how good someone writes haha, if i get the chills upon reading it and get out of seat a little bit to examine the words closer and time stand still for a second and then all of a sudden, i read the whole thing and im sitting there like :O

in other words, i really enjoyed it and hope to see more from you in the future :D
 
wow i just typed that like an idiot, i apologize for the errors haha i am still a little mind blown from your poem :O
 
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