Tales of a Bi-Polar Fetus

[Altered_Soul9]

I sit quietly behind the seems.
Praying for the pain.
I want to be liberated by it.
I've drained all I can out of you.
and you don't care, but thats okay.
I still enjoy doing this to you.
This battle within you mind lingers.
But i'm okay, cause your to weak.
And you shall fall before my black eyes.
The wound begins to break the stitches.
And I sit here and wait.
So I can free myself and destroy you.
The light shines thru your skin.
And your face begins to bleed.
It's finally time for me to kill you.
I break thru your eyes.
Only to realize....
....
That your the one that kept me alive.
And now your dead.
Jerking in the corner.
Your eyes rolled away from the light.
The air burns my nostrils and my skin begins to flake off.
I try to force my way back into your body.
I try to revive to sunken heart.
But I have failed...
I loved you so much.
For you see my love...
I didn't want to die.

The transparent hand of Lucifer grabs my neck.

 

[froggygirl]

And you shall fall before my black eyes.
The wound begins to break the stitches.
And I sit here and wait.
So I can free myself and destroy you.


Only to realize....
....
That your the one that kept me alive.


I try to force my way back into your body.
I try to revive to sunken heart.
But I have failed...
I loved you so much.
For you see my love...
I didn't want to die.

The transparent hand of Lucifer grabs my neck.

I tried to pick out my favorite lines, and realized it was most of the poem anyway. I really liked it.. the way it hit me. Great work.

 

[RareForm]

good one

 

[raverchik]

I liked this

 

[Pantomime7]

I really like this. I feel the raw emotion flowing from your words. I sense a vein of anger in these words and yet love seeping from the same crack. I relate to this deeply my friend..... Mad Props!!

 

[neverwas]

excellent

 

[Xherrus]

Gruesome, startling imagery. I might find it enjoyable if the symbolism were more apparent to me.