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cherub

cherub

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I think I know what you're about to say
I can see it in your eyes and on your face
We swore we never would
So while the words are still unspoken
Don't you think you should
Take a breath
Take a moment
Take your time
Before you lie
'Cause once you do
Love is different
Everything changes
Between you and I
And it gets easier every time
Oh and you can still change your mind
Before you lie
All I ask of you is honesty
We said that's how this love will always be
So careful what you say
'Cause it only takes a half a truth
To throw it all away
It's up to you
This can go go either way
You get to choose
Which road we take
So
Take a breath
Take a moment
Take your time
Before you lie
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" Stay with me just for today and let your soul come rest for a minute. "
 
wowzers, I like this very much. The words sound melodic, and I can definitely picure these as lyrics to a song.
 
with those words im taken back in time. ive felt that way, but unfortunately they didnt think or take their time.
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"split a piece of wood and you'll find me, pick up a stone and I am there."
 
Beautifully written hun.
Love ya lots!!
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*hugs*
~kimmy.
 
So very.... very true...
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In America, sex is an obsession; in other parts of the world, it's a fact.
 
really love this...mostly because when i read i always picture how it would be presented, and the words & beat roll off one another beautifully.
than you
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"one good thing about music, when it hits you, you feel no pain"-marley
"if dreams were thunder, and lightning was desire, this old house would have burned down a long time ago"b.raitt
"there is a party in my mind, and i hope it never stops, there is a party up there allt he time, we are gonna party till we drop"d.byrne
***satori shalom***
 
Dayum mommy. That was great. Been a while since I've checked out words forum. And I'm glad I did. You keep em coming like that alrighty.
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hugs,
Coreo
 
cherub... i dont know what to say - this leaves me speechless. i havent been around the words forum in a while, but i'm definitely glad i read this. i hope all is well with you. **hugs**
Mellabopper
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animals are for petting!
"does anyone know where we are? because i think i dont have a clue"
"damn the man, save the empire!" - empire records
Corruption is key.
 
Why is it that every time I have five minutes left at the end of the day, I always pop in this forum for a quick look, read one of Cherub's posts and end up crying.....
That was f*kin beautiful, thanks
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you write so many awesome pieces that i forget which is which, so here i am sitting, i have to leave for class in about 5 seconds...and well i read this again...and i have chills. Because lord, maybe the first time i didn't read it good enough, but this really is a wonderful piece. Thanks for your words momma...you kick some serious ass.
love
ange
 
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