Symptospection

[TiberCross]

love seems to me
such a bitter bi-polar entanglement
it dreams and weeps
another little lie that becomes dangerous
maybe i'm just a fatalist
depriving myself of real connection
maybe i'm some sort of sadist
designed by life for forever defection
look, it started out about love
and now i've made it about me
am i as selfish as they say
or eternally lost hopelessly?

 

[skjalff]

me likes a lot! for me it is hard to put on paper what i saw taking a critical look inside of me. great work.


skjalff

 

[Laquatus0]

nice rhyming and theme. g/w.

 

[Altered_Soul9]

This was awesome. Very Nice

 

[onetwothreefour]

"bitter bi-polar entanglement" is nice.

this is a good poem, and would sound really nice *spoken*, i think

 

[RareForm]

I love your poetry man, you have such a distinct style that I look forward to every time I see your name in here, you're sort of like an "official wizard" something...

 

[wanderer21]

I CAN TOTALLY RELATE!! I love this poem...I'm printing it out for my thoughts journal. AWESOME!

 

[froggygirl]

I like it a lot... it flows nicely, and it has good rhyming.. and it makes me think, great job

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

That was real good. I loved that. Great write.

 

[mariacallas]

AWESOME POEM I LOVE IT!!!!!
and that is so rare for me.....to love a poem at first sight, that is.

 

[cherub]

If we don't have ourselves, then what would there to be selfish about? Your writting once again outstanding to say the least, as much as i am good at rationalizing feelings like these, it is not probably one i have not felt myself.

Great stuff!

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Amazing write...pointed and rough, and bitter to read.
I really liked the feel to this.