Sweet delay

[induced nirvana]

Its like a green light
and so begins the rush
that can only be experienced in this way
the most tender piece of space and time you could imagine
a moment before our skin meets
and we look into each others eyes
as we try to prelong
the moment deep inside the sweet delay

 

[katmeow]

the most tender piece of space and time you could imagine
a moment before our skin meets
and we look into each others eyes
the moment deep inside the sweet delay

Lovely writing

 

[yakksoho]

This short little poem knocked me senseless
man I know just what it feels like
and your words describe perfectly the feeling of the 'sweet delay'

a moment before our skin meets
and we look into each others eyes
the moment deep inside the sweet delay

These three really spelt it out . . . one cannot say it better than this
Thank you man this piece was wonderful!

 

[induced nirvana]

I wanna thank you.....

Thanks to everyone who appreciate things that come straight from the heart. regards I.D.
(pay attention yank sympathising skippies....)