Survival of the fitest.

[FixXxer]

one day i sat beside myself,
i wondered, what will become of this life,
i realized that it doesnt matter,
and continued on.

weeks later, i thougt the same thing,
images of pain entered my sight,
as internal as my thoughts,
remembering times of joy, i swiftly forgot.

every night should be a pleasure,
another time of decent leisure,
a fun time with all my friends,
at least one more chance for us all to meet ends.

continuing solumnly, i slowly forgave,
all the mistakes, forsaking me,
i realize we are all human,
and these faults are needed to remain in order.

disorder,
the only border which can keep us align,
in time, we'll all be in sync,
dont worry, failed ideas are thrown down the sink.

forgotten by many, keep ourselves steady,
as we remain alive, these things may strive,
but we, as individuals...
we will survive.

 

[beanpoophead]

its sad, but not

im not sure what emoition to feel when i read this

but i like it

 

[FixXxer]

honestly.. i have no clue what i was feeling when i wrote this..

i read it and think.. wow, what the fuck was i thinking, yet... its well written i thought, i flowed through the whole thing.. they were my EXACT thoughts, and i felt like not ryhming for once..

 

[cherub]

I actually love this piece completely, maybe cause it came without trying and just what you were thinking and just who you are.....

amazing darlin loved reading it.

 

[neverwas]

sometimes my best work is the un-ploished and un-edited version.

i like doin what youve demonstarted you can do...just sit infront of a keyboard and throw out whats running through your head. its not easy but its a good outlet

 

[FixXxer]

i usually write poems under an influence, and to send a future messege to my sober self, to learn something.. something i need to learn.. this is one of those peices.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Amazing and quite raw.
I really liked this.