Sundays

[someone]

5 minutes ago you were lying beside me,
your so beautiful when your asleep
your hair a mess
the snoring sound you make,
although your in denial...
I wish you were always there
that we could spend Sundays in bed
......you and I
rain or shine
I love to watch you when you speak,
whatever it is you may say
just to watch your lips form words
just to have you here
This will be a long day.....
I wish I wasn't awake for this part
my thoughts pick up pace and race through my mind
what did you mean?
your such a mystery
maybe the truth is unveiled
Yet I refuse to see it
I wish we could spend Sundays together....
you and me
My laundry is on the floor
I think you left your belt
I can here laughter from the next room
the walls are paper thin,
5 hours later.....i'm still lying here
my attempts to sleep in vain
I can still feel you on my skin
It makes me sad
I can hear the music play in the background
......I love this song....
yet I can barley hear the words because you dance between them all
5 minutes from now.....
I'll get out of this bed and do my laundry....
Sundays are the longest day of the week

 

[up all night]

You just perfectly described so many of my days!!!
*sigh*
Seriously, the whole feel of this piece....wow.
Thank you.

 

[E-girl]

I can still feel you on my skin
It makes me sad
I can hear the music play in the background
......I love this song....
yet I can barley hear the words because you dance between them all
this was breathtaking! you just became one of my new favorite poets... and i'm printing this and putting it on my wall with my collection
i feel this way about someone too. and its good to feel like that after so many months of feeling down and depressed about someone else, someone who hurt me.
it feels really good to have someone like this to think about and write about. and i'm happy for you, that you have someone like this too.
its summmer... and love is in the air