Sunday [cos I can't really think of a title]

[katmeow]

Another lonely sunday
And sunsets always remind me of you
Memory of last night lingers on my lips
The taste of cigarettes and alcohol
From a boy who doesn't quite
Fill your space

One night stands
And hazy afternoons
Are no substitute for the mornings
Where fumbling hands
And mumbled I love yous
melted away the winter chill

And the question remains
Did he use me or did I use him
Or were we both having such difficulty
Swallowing down that bitter pill of loneliness
That a night wrapped up in false emotion
Seemed a valid panacea

Either way
I still wake up
To an empty bed
And another empty day
my talents never lay
In moving on

 

[neverwas]

And the question remains
Did he use me or did I use him
Or were we both having such difficulty
Swallowing down that bitter pill of loneliness
That a night wrapped up in false emotion
Seemed a valid panacea

honey i hope you're ok :/

i love you.

 

[up all night]

Such a familiar emotion.

 

[cherub]

*lovely* is only part of what does this justice. Memories are always something to hang on to,, even if they become dreams we wish to have they help us process and move on.
Why is it Sunday is usually that day >?

 

[beanpoophead]

really, really good job. this poem flows sooo well.

sundays are lonely for me too

 

[Mean Girl]

Kat, I don't know if I've said this, or elucidated on it enough, but I have a tremendous amount of respect and love for you and your works. I know we don't talk as much as we could or should, and I would like to make amends for that, you're a quality person, and this is yet another quality piece of work from you.

As a side note, I could hook you up with a cheap publishing deal if you ever wanted to print your works?!

 

[E-girl]

i really liked this -- although at the end, i kinda felt like i was left hanging -- just a little. but i definitely felt where you are coming from on this one -- and i really hope you are able to move on.

 

[katmeow]

Muchos thanks all

Cherub, I think it's cos Sunday's are just the perfect day for lazing about in the comfort of someone special's arms!

MG *hugs*

E-girl, possibly less like hanging, than me sitting in my rut, staring at the wall I'm trying to climb over It was just one of those days when you get sad about your ex and the fact that he's with someone new, while you're still left comparing anyone new you meet to the way he made you feel and find that they don't come close.

I'm getting there, slowly!

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

so sad, i know what it feels like to miss someones touch - and to just miss anyones touch too!

 

[muzby]

you're still left comparing anyone new you meet to the way he made you feel and find that they don't come close

kat - just remember that you built up these feelings with your ex over time... you built a strong bond that you won't find straight away with someone else, it will take the time, love and commitment that you put into your last relationship...

don't worry.. you are an awesome, genuine person, and you'll be a great prize for a lucky guy out there...