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Substitute Girlfriend

yourgirl

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Mar 24, 2002
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We don’t talk much about her but she’s still around
As you kiss me, I feel her laughter on your lips
She’s inside of you I used to see yourself in your eyes
Now I see hers too, you are barely there clouded -so nonchalant
I wish you could believe, I too, can be that spark in your eyes
I can’t make you crazy, but I can make you calm
Come laugh with me, forget about the pain
We can do it together,can't we?
And yet, you touch me, you enter me, I love you, I believe in you,
Will you ever let me live inside of you as she does?
We’re casual, we’re real, but I’m not her am I?
I’ll never show my fear my dear
But I know it’s still her you rather be holding
I'm always your substitute
[ 25 March 2002: Message edited by: yourgirl ]
 
that unfortunately sounds alot like the reasons my ex girlfriends became my ex girlfriends.....sometimes its just hard to forget someone you love and move on
 
As you kiss me, I feel her laughter on your lips
i got chills when i read this. very powerful stuff. this is definitely one of my favorite poems in a long time. they brought up a lot of emotions inside me that i didnt know existed.
keep writing sweetie. your words are hauntingly beautiful.
 
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