strip it down

[Mr. Sticky]

i'll shed a skin of wisdom
that reeks of time-honed plans
to cast off the loathed shackles
of peers and their cackles
who mistake me for more than I am

 

[Binkie]

I dig it
less is more
A
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The more you run over a dead cat the flatter it gets...

 

[FoX]

Ditto.

 

[Angelight]

Two-thumbs up

 

[Mr. Nice Guy]

Damn, i really liked that. I give it two thumbs up and one puckered asshole.

 

[Mr. Sticky]

Holy shit! A puckered asshole? I'm ready to be published!
Thanks folks.

 

[Noodle]

interesting.

< wut u mean anyway?

 

[Mellabopper]

 

[Dagny]

About f**king time.

 

[Mr. Sticky]

Dagny,
And just WTF do mean by that anyway?

 

[femmme fatal]

very nice.... i think that's one of the only serious things i've ever seen you post hunn...
aj the femme
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the extra M is for MmmMmmmm
Be Good!!!

 

[Zennie]

i copied it into my journal. kickass hun

 

[Dagny]

i was high, and i forgot...but if i remember later, i'll let you know

 

[bc]

hmm....saw the title...saw the author, was all ready for a dirty little limerick or something.
ah well.
mr. sticky, i don't think i can ever say it enough, i love your way with words, your mastery of the english language is to be commended. seriously man, you rock ass.
bc
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bc-
**Proud to be an Official member of the Stuck-Up/8-Up Crew**
"Fuck PLUR! it's all about hardcore ass fucking!!"
We'll make great pets...
"drug suppliers, typically wearing 'Ecko' brand sweat shirts shuffle around the dance floor, chanting softly, 'want some pills? k?'" - Shu Shin Luh, The Chicago Sun-Times

 

[*SWeeT-e*]

Absolutely brilliant hun...to be able to use so few words and inject such meaning into them so that I have to read it over a couple of times before really grasping it...shows real talent.

Much love,
~kimmy.
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~*~I hope you take a piece of me with you...~*~

 

[EbowTheLetter]

Ha, bc called you a rock ass!
Good show, old chap!
Polkabow (*shrug* fuck if i know...)

 

[ice-9]

BUMP
This has been away from the first page for way too long.

 

[utopiacmm]

thats a good poem

 

[SUGARoll]

I don't get it?
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"DiDn'T KnOw wHaT i WaS dOiNg bUt DiD iT AnYwAyS"
"i dO WhAt ThE VoIcEs In mY HeAd tELl mE tO"

 

[bc]

SUGA, read it carefully.
there's a lot of meaning, and believe me, sticky has chosen those words carefully.
bc