Stream of conciousness 2.

[*Cosmic Mist*]

Stream of conciousness writing... It's SO theraputic damnit!
Noise -
surrounding me;
Filling me;
Holding me;
Controling me...
...I cannot breathe...
Suffocating in a pool of ill thoughts,
and temperamental unease.
I am one with this mass destruction all around me,
That chaotic thumping that JUST WILL NOT END!
There is crying -
a familiar voice -
whimpering...
... screaming....
...calling...
But calling for what, or for whom?
I dont' know...
I guess i never will...
But WHEN WILL IT STOP?
I am dizzy;
spinning.
Spinning.
SPINNING.
SPINNING!
Please just give me peace; just let me be.
I'm ill. I think i'm going to be sick all over the floor...

 

[clue_liss]

i'm not the most stable person I know..
And.. when I was hectically into my pills.. and the comedowns got worse and worse..
YOUR POEM.. describes exactly how I'd feel midweek..
uneasy..
helpless
freaked out
my thoughts and evils out of control!
Well written..

I love stream of conciousness!