stop it before you go crazy...

[Furnace]

I just kinda died for you
but does it matter
when all of this means nothing
in the eyes of those you love?
This heat is driving me mad
from not being able to speak to anyone
not being able to tell someone how I feel
all of this coming out of me
and all of it going back into me
thanks for not being able to listen.

 

[JCAP]

This heat is driving me mad...][/[/B...isn't the heat driving all of us mad?
...thanks for not being able to listen... THIS IS MY favorite line, POWERFUL!
[ 25 July 2002: Message edited by: JCAP ]

 

[harraser]

dude this is a strong poem, and I think i know how you feel, Ive been there more than a few times myself.
If you ever need someone to vent to dont hesitate to drop me a line ok.
ant

 

[*Cosmic Mist*]

Two quotes:

I just kinda died for you

all of this coming out of me
and all of it going back into me
I love this piece. Of all the pieces i have read here recently, this has to be one of the ones that i can relate to best. It is so short and simple, yet succinct and powerful... and i'm sure it works on many levels...