stolen moments

[ChemicalIllusion]

I love you
Selfishly
Stolen moments out of time

I need you
Desperately
Then I remember you can’t be mine

I want you
Intensely
A wilful, spoilt child

I hate you
Terribly
Experience analysed and filed

You hurt me
Do you realise
I didn’t think you had the power

Self-loathing
Recriminations
Dissecting every hour

Reality
A cold intrusion
We should have read the signs

Remembrance
Forever
Of our moments out of time

 

[plazma]

F***kin good work!

Fucking nice work, I love how short and sharp this feels, and there's also that edge of feeling there. Very very very nice. I think its going to stay in my memory just because of that way it sums up that swirl of emotions that everyone is so familiar with.

Welcome to bluelight.

-plaz out-

 

[bisKi]

good work

Self-loathing
Recriminations
Dissecting every hour

Reality
A cold intrusion
We should have read the signs

like this piece. keep it up. so what i'm feeling at the moment.

 

[neverwas]

great peice...familirarities from whats writen when compared to my life right now...sighs...