staring sightless

[mirabii]

I am overwhelmed.
Here at the lowest point of a
Vast crevasse, I stare unseeing.
No light enters this place.
Only the freezing wind whispering
Enchantments in my ears
Prevents the panick setting in.
I'd believe I had fallen into
Neverending nothingness..
Still I stare sightless and somehow
Surrounded by a solitary thought.
What broke my fall?
No warnings, no safety net thrown out in front,
A tightly woven yet flexible material
Made up of what if, pride and paranoia.
Not even wings stretched in readiness..
What broke my fall?
Somehow realising the fatality of my plight
I frantically search the darkness
For signs of some fantastical hero.
Still I seem to be in one piece..
But here where the light does not reach
I begin to feel an intense
Fear surround me - filling the cool air
So that sights and sounds are amplified,
My heart screaming with no one to answer
Its terrified plea..

 

[Tarsarlan]

*shudders* ...Scary, cold, lonely... Possibly the worst feeling I could go through... 'specially if it was the result of the loss of a loved one... Thankfully I havn't had to go through that... Anyway, way off track...
Nicely written mirabii, the emotion is tangible...

 

[MangoXTC]

The concept of "sent chills up my spine" is right. Pure lonlieness. Reminds me of what my last breath would bring; expierencing any privous spiritual beliefes falling through my fingers.