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Star crossed

NeWBoRN

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Sorry to bore you lot with another piece, but it was a song that I wrote a couple of years ago after splitting up with a long term girlfriend and i thought most people who have been in a situation similar might be able to relate to it, woah long sentence!....
He'd never felt a look like that,
across the room to where he sat,
he'd never heard a voice so scared,
of losing what was always there,
the lights were low and the nights were cold,
the plated silver shone like gold,
A headline flashed before his eyes,
of a star crossed lovers suicide.
it was a friday night the thirteenth day,
his luck was up and in the way,
with no one there to hold their hands,
they drank their way across the sands,
and thought of all the things they'd done,
and never told to anyone,
Then just before it stole his pride,
the star crossed lovers took their life.
so parents cried and friends they laughed,
her dreams of futures died then after,
all of this theres still no change,
my choice of word is oh so strange,
they flipped for love at heads or tails,
should've known it never fails,
then packed their bags and hitched a ride,
On a star crossed lovers suicide..
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See you there.....
 
that was really beautiful
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i especially liked this part:
they flipped for love at heads or tails,
should've known it never fails,
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E-girl
IM: tiggersgurl2067
"...there are 2 paths, you can go back, but in the long run... there's still time to change the road you're on..."
 
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