Spirit of Apathetic Charm (Don't be Alarmed)

[PhorIndicator]

A resonating empty presence has come to fill a voidless space.
It comes at night and after hours, it comes and

Brings its faceless face.
It’s solitude when hope is dormant,
Solemnity and silence still

It enters through the windowsill
It passes like an autumn season
Its quiet lull’s a mask of reason

The wind could be its carrier
But it is not its messenger

Dreams and visions upon hilltops
Sunsets Beauty Despair
Ringing truly when you gaze
Or daydream in wistful haze

The emptiness that lies within
The world makes known in subtle ways
But it exists and it persists
So clandestine, so ominous
Such irony fused with listlessness

Spirit of Apathetic Charm
Moves through Time like ocean tides
Like a digital clock with no alarm
Gliding through souls it briefly hides

To return to wind where it abides
Wandering restless o’er Time’s tides

 

[RareForm]

great writing, and this was my favorite part:

Spirit of Apathetic Charm
Moves through Time like ocean tides
Like a digital clock with no alarm
Gliding through souls it briefly hides

 

[cherub]

I think this is a lovely piece it is kinda serene to me and great imagery !

 

[skjalff]

I liked this a lot, very good work! Seemed serene to me also.. Really dig the rithm of this one! I like the lines:

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The emptiness that lies within
The world makes known in subtle ways
But it exists and it persists
So clandestine, so ominous
Such irony fused with listlessness

Spirit of Apathetic Charm
Moves through Time like ocean tides
Like a digital clock with no alarm
Gliding through souls it briefly hides
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the best. Again, good work!


skjalff