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doesntmatter

Bluelighter
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your distant here
for numb
full grown

i'm all aware
which way is town

you decide here
fall now
fall not.

i'm all aware
which way is town


hate to blow you away
was about to
another fight open

terrify

a major attack is underway

a major attack is underway

we require a blanket of salvation.

hate to blow you away

was about to tare a fight open.

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i wrote this listening to a pinback song originally. i knew i wasn't hearing the lyrics correctly, but my brain started making my version of it one day. i decided to write it down and this is what it is. just trying to be honest, i wouldn't have written this without that song.

come to find out underway and require are actually correct. i knew blanket was.
 
That's something I love doing: playing songs and mishearing the lyrics! I find the words that arise are often inflected with the emotion of the song (but not always).

Often I hear a song in my head, and then I put new words to it. It's a habit I have - it seems to be a mostly subconscious process.

I don't know Pinback's stuff, but I like the words you've come up with. They have a leftfield flow, and a strange beauty to them. The kind of strange beauty I like to hear in song lyrics.

These two lines really hit me in a kind of drugged-out, transportive way:

i'm all aware
which way is town
 
hahaha.

cool. glad im not the only one. felt like i was stealing it or something, thats why i put the disclaimer.
 
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