something random

[Frosty da snowman]

We drift like dreams
Soft floating motes on waves of time
Currents fast and rippling drive us toward an uncertain future
Some swim with the tide scratching, clawing their way to the beach
Others drive themselves hard away from land energy spent they drift down into dark waters
And still other try to stay still franticly trading water calling forth sharks to quell their madness
I drift moving only with the tide
Some days I feel the beach underneath me and other days only the warm cradling water
Perhaps on day I will learn to swim
no title. nothing i can think pf really fits

 

[MezZedUp]

nice work

 

[Hemlock]

Very nice. Really. No title necessary, in fact I think what you chose is quite right for this.
I have to admit a great big grin of enjoyment from reading this. Thank you.

 

[Frosty da snowman]

^^^^^^ no title necessary

 

[Frosty da snowman]

Sorry for the double post peeps I hit enter when I didn't mean to and i still havent fiqured out how to edit a message once it's been posted. anywyas I was about to say to Hemlock it's allways kinda annoyed me that i never could find a title for just about anything i've ever written.

 

[harraser]

it gives me the shits when I cant think of a title too.
see the little "page" icon with a pencil on it at the top of your post.....its the edit function I dont really care about double posts but I figured Id tell you just coz its handy to know
I liked your writing by the way
"learn to swim, learn to swim, learn to swim"-TOOL

 

[Frosty da snowman]

Originally posted by harraser:
see the little "page" icon with a pencil on it at the top of your post.....its the edit function I dont really care about double posts but I figured Id tell you just coz its handy to know
^^^^^thank u
I liked your writing by the way
^^^^^thank u again
"learn to swim, learn to swim, learn to swim"-TOOL [/QB]
^^^^one off my fav songs