something different

[cloud 9]

ok this isnt exactly how i feel about the situation. all though i have thought about it before. i mean i very much want a kid one day. well anyway comment as you wish, question if you want and please feel free to say whatever. i will start asking this from readers as i am trying to get way more into poetry instead of just writing it.
creating life is but a simple task
knowing your bringing a child to this world
can be the most amazing thing
especially when you see them for the first time
thinking how beautiful they will grow up to be
the innocent smile of not knowing whats to come
changes your thought to sadness and despair
what have i done
brought you to a place where sadness is real
growing up through the pain of what is known as the world
anger, loneliness, fear, and love
are but some of the things expected to face
you can blame me, if you cant see through
as long as you forgive me, when you want to
i'll guide you by the hand
until you can truly understand.

 

[Sugar Ant]

and I truly hope you always be there
peace*
[ 15 February 2002: Message edited by: Sugar Ant ]

 

[Dagny]

Very beautiful, cloud. Being someone's mom is the scariest thing I can imagine. But that doesn't mean that I want it any less - if we didn't worry about it, then we shouldn't be parents to begin with.
As far as your writing style, you have grown so much over the last year with your writing! I can see you experimenting with different styles and forms of expression - keep it going. When you've written something that makes you cry every time you read it, then you've arrived.
Miss you, love you, n stuff. :D

 

[Sweetpea]

writing is poetry too-all about da flow
I too, look very forward to having a child-very sweet cloud