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someday...not today

nephil

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Nov 18, 2001
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Location
in constant motion
Confusion
has infected my mind like a disease
My ears bleed
from the silence

Its too quiet
I cant hear what you're thinking
Im bringing
as much as I can
to this mental conversation

the rotation
of thoughts
about the situation
is endless
they have no destination

Cycling around inside of here
telling me one thing
and then another
I have yet to discover
which notion is better

To Hope that one day
my dreams will come true
or
on the other hand
give up and
stop thinking about you

I have no direction
no sense of solution
this mental pollution
has caused an infection.
or rather, an affliction
of the mental kind

my mind
is in a whirlwind
but my eyes stay unblind

I can see quite clear
how near
ive come
to finding myself
thru another someone.

My new best friends
are patience and time
Sure
Ill endure
and eventually shine.....yep, my friend, just like you shine.:)


[edit] I just wanted to clarify...this is in a way directed towards myself, and some decisions i have been facing lately. i find myself clouded with thought sometimes, and really don't have an outlet for it. my mind is constantly being pulled at both ends, and it is hard to recognize yourself in the midst of all of that.[/edit]
 
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that is really good, expecially this:

To Hope that one day
my dreams will come true
or
on the other hand
give up and
stop thinking about you

nice job :D
 
To Hope that one day
my dreams will come true
or
on the other hand
give up and
stop thinking about you
I can see quite clear
how near
ive come
to finding myself
thru another someone.
you rock the "perhaps instead of tv..." thread and you rock here, too. i can relate fairly well to those two stanzas... well, to be honest, i can relate to the entire thing, ESPECIALLY those two stanzas. beautifully worded, the structure is just--- immaculate. each line leans towards the next, like... you WANT to know what's gonna come next. i love it :D
 
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