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sadie10278

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...i wrote them last night in the middle of the night, i woke up and was thinking...then i went back to sleep. i never write poetry and i don't know why i woke up to write these. they are pretty bad but bear with me, again i never write this stuff, i just wrote what i feel.
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no one to notice me
i don't notice me
notice the pain
you notice...
you bitch at me
"you are hiding"
damn right i'm hiding...
from you...
from me...
you noticed.
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There is a fear inside of me
afraid to speak
why am i scared?
Not a fear of speaking...
of admitting.
That is the first step.
Isn't it?
I ask myself these questions...
Will I answer?
Admit I am weak.
Admit I am sad.
Admit I am wrong.
Admit I AM NOT PERFECT!!!
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you ran away
from me
from him
run to mommy...
she will make it all better.
is it better now?
NO?!?!
you ran
away
from me.
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what do you do
when you realize
your world is spinning around you
and it won't stop
for you to catch up?
i feel lost in the movement.
so i stand by
and watch
and wait
no it won't stop
i trip and fall trying to catch it.
humiliated.
run away.
that's all i do...
run away...
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ok that's all i just wanted to share some feelings with somebody. i didnt write them for them to be good, but oh well. thanks for reading
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nice one. feels like i used to feel a couple o fyears ago. i really enjoyed reading it and it touched me.
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hi sadie10278, i don't know you, but your poems are very deep and insightful, i liked them very much. it seems to me like you're working through some issues at this stage in you life. hang in there. i especially liked your second poem. getting to truly know and understand who you are is hard. i went through the process a few years ago. but when you come to understand who you are, and to like yourself, is the best feeling ever. and don't worry about your writing, if it conveys your feelings across to someone else, then it is good. i appreciated your thoughts very much, and keep writing, it can sometimes be the best form of therapy.
 
i really liked this piece. maybe you *should* write more often.. the best poets are usually the ones that dont know of their talent. *thumbs up*
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Wow, these are really really good. You should express yourself this way more often. I know you personally, and just like me you oftentimes have difficulty expressing your thougts and feelings. Looks like through this poetry you really opened up. I like.....alot
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I'd post a poem but I think you know how my poems end up HAHAHA
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thanks you guys for responding with encouragement, i really needed it. it was the strangest thing. i never write and then the other night i woke up to write these. well last night i was at a friends house and he does tarot card readings and he gave me a general reading. there were a lot of cards that had to do with creativity and telling me to keep going with something i just started. this is also good encouragement. i know my poems aren't great but i have to say i really do put a lot of feeling into them
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hopefully i will keep this going and write some more. it really helped me
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thanks y'all
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PLURR
sarah
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"Reality is a crutch for people who can't handle drugs." --Lily Tomlin
"I'd like to quit thinking of the present as some minor insignificant preamble to something else." -- Dazed and Confused
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[This message has been edited by sadie10278 (edited 19 March 2001).]
 
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