Solitude

[CrYsTaLe]

Darkness piercing my eyes,
I only pray for an end.
To feel admoration and desire from someone other than myself.
To have a place in this vast world.
Imagery of crimson blood falling from my body to the floor
captivates my mind with curiosity.
But I'm scared
scared of what could be.
Solitude, hopelessness, and revenge
they all pull me from reality in the direction of pure insanity.
If they only knew,
knew what their words do to me
Would they continue to speak?
My mind open and pure
is over run by my heart,
cold broken and tormented.
One quick fluid movement
that's all it will take
and everthing will stop
including the pain.

 

[neverwas]

My mind open and pure
is over run by my heart,
cold broken and tormented.
One quick fluid movement
that's all it will take
and everthing will stop
including the pain.

thats a thought i think i am all to familiar with i use to think i would go to any measure or length to ease my pain...attain my solitude...but then i found people that loved me for my problems and actually helped sort me out

your writting is powerful and blunt and straight to the point. i only hope its not written based on your life as is

 

[RareForm]

good work

 

[CrYsTaLe]

thanks, no it's not completely based on true events, almost but not really

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

If they only knew,
knew what their words do to me
Would they continue to speak?

I hear you, others (and me too) tend to disseminate things in terms of what we understand, and we tend to be unforgiving to anything sitting outside our comfort zone. I have been on the receiving end of this most of my life. Nice work, nice to see some new, erm, faces in Words!

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I've heard this before and its gets better every tiem I hear it.

 

[Pantomime7]

I would have to say that I love this piece. The words, the imagery, everything flows so fluidly. I wish I had read this sooner, yet I am grateful I stumbled upon it now. Great writing......... maybe we'll see more from you(hope)