So sorely missed (Kymbo's Lament)

[Naughtiest_Maximus]

So often said,
so keenly felt.
The good die young,
like heat of breath.
Your presence felt
so sorely missed.

That acid wit,
or casual smile.
Your selfless ways,
i couldn't fit.
Adivice well given,
too late to get.

The laugh that showed no constrain,
afraid i'll lose it's last recall.
A true and heartfelt friendship
couldn't sheild your pain.
Such turmoil born,
you were never to blame

So often said,
so keenly felt.
The good die young,
like heat of breath.
Your presence felt
so sorely missed.

So sorely missed.

 

[skjalff]

This is beautiful! I definitely felt it. The rithm of the middle two is cool, sort of breaks and doesnt end as I expected it too. Great work!!



skjalff

 

[katmeow]

I can picture this as a song - lovely work