so much style and it's wasted

[rollinboyo]

Tell me what ya'll think of these:

1 -
I see them every day
punching in and punching out
and I wonder
about the hidden meaning in that phrase
apathy and bravery
that weird combination that keeps them sane
oiling the tools of others' success
treading water in the best of times
dragged under in the worst
rip tides zip past
and the sharks are everywhere

2 -
boredom clings
clutching at my ankle
fuck off man!
but I just can't shake him
listless gaze on dirty fingers
watching the nails grow
try surfing the web
nothing like california
that electronic hum that never quite goes away
that blue glow, 21st century lighting
put my hand on my dick
think about rubbing one out
but clean up would be a bitch
fuck it
I'll just go to sleep

 

[New]

Nice flow. Probably because you kept the topic matter to you.

 

[manic_panic]

hah. a fun read